新农请各位大大帮我看下ps
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我的本专业是ee，现在转cs申请ms了{:4_85:}，科研经历什么的主要是ee方面的，而且偏semiconductor{:4_85:}（谁做谁知道，读博才有出路，哎，不敢读），现在有学校交流项目，可以选solid electronic和cs，ic design，我选了solid和cs（学位ece，方向有solid和cs，其实是想申请cs但是底气不足），于是写了下面的一篇ps，改来改去总觉的不稳，主要希望没有太大问题，求稳为上，所以把ps发上来给各位大大看看，先谢过了
Electronics industry and computer science have changed our lives. In a very short period it has changed the way we have utilized to control production and communicate with people. It is the industry that is going to shape our future for centuries to come. Hence I desire to master in electrical and computer engineering.
My interest in electronics and computer science blossomed during my junior high school years. When I was in junior high school, I got my first computer with which I started my own exploration in the world of science. And it was when my parents’ nightmare began. In order to figure out the hardware of the computer, I dismantled my first computer for many times. I follow the instructions from the Internet forum and replace the original computer components with the elements with high performance.
When I was in the senior high school, I listened carefully in all my science class. I spent more time on doing exercises and training my thinking ability. The Second Prize in Physics Olympic was the best proof of my great efforts. After graduating from my high school, because of my great eagerness of computer engineering, I choose（我的学校编辑掉了）, to continue my dream.
In（学校）, I concentrated on my class and I find I have a good command of physics. Actually, the scores of all my courses associated with physics are more than 90, so I think I may have a gift for the field. Then comes the chance. I apply for the Science and Technology Innovation Foundation successfully and my professor, who is also my referee, arranged me as the leader of the team. I led my partners to explore the preparation of gadolinium gallium garnet (GGG) polycrystalline material by coprecinitation method and analyzed its optical property. During the procedure, I found the XDR curves of GGG had some buzzes .So I performed the experiment several times and found that after the boiling solution was cooled, some minute deposition(Ga2O3) cause the lack of element Ga, which finally led to the phenomenon. In the experiment, I not only learned how to conduct the instrument, but also got hold of how to analyze and solve the unexpected problems. In addition, the experiment allowed me to acquire some useful analysis software, like Jade6 and Origin, and gave me the opportunity to learn how to organize academic articles, which I supposed could help me in future research. The achievement of the innovation fund encouraged me to make more effort to continue my research work and build my confidence to apply your graduate program.
The atmosphere in （学校） also enhances my love of computer programs. For instance, some of my classmates applied Intel Galileo development boards and they liked to exchange their ideas about how to utilize them to accomplish interesting functions. Thus, it is very nature for me to be influenced in the atmosphere. In the first semester, learned C/C++ language by myself and used it to realize some interesting functions, such as a calculator. Then I learned to use g++ in Linux operation system and felt crazy about the open source code. Then I met a professor in the competition held by Freescale, a global top 500 company, in the last semester. During the match I had a pleasant conversation with him and he asked if I was interested in data mining. In addition, he recommended to me some famous books in the field. Then I read The Recommender Systems and became absorbed by the field. I found many websites utilize the collaborative filtering algorithm to filter irrelevant information, so they can attract more customers and boost their profits greatly. The method really interested me so I participated in his projects in the last semester. Though I entered a new field that I seldom touched before, I enjoyed the field and devoted myself to the study of the recommender system algorithms. Thus, I believe my effort will pay off.
Now I have a dream to become a well-trained engineer so that I can enjoy myself in the field of technology application as well as in the field of theoretical research. Considering my firm professional foundation in semiconductor physics and the interest in computer programming, I would like to choose computer engineering or solid state electronics as my graduate study field.The professors and alumni have made vast accomplishments in the fields of engineering, so I strongly believe that Rutgers will give me a chance to explore the abundant opportunities and possible ways for me to contribute to society in the future.
Electronics industry and computer science have changed our lives. In a very short period it has changed the way we have utilized to control production and communicate with people. It is the industry that is going to shape our future for centuries to come. Hence I desire to master in electrical and computer engineering.
My interest in electronics and computer science blossomed during my junior high school years. When I was in junior high school, I got my first computer with which I started my own exploration in the world of science. And it was when my parents’ nightmare began. In order to figure out the hardware of the computer, I dismantled my first computer for many times. I follow the instructions from the Internet forum and replace the original computer components with the elements with high performance.
When I was in the senior high school, I listened carefully in all my science class. I spent more time on doing exercises and training my thinking ability. The Second Prize in Physics Olympic was the best proof of my great efforts. After graduating from my high school, because of my great eagerness of computer engineering, I choose（我的学校编辑掉了）, to continue my dream.
In（学校）, I concentrated on my class and I find I have a good command of physics. Actually, the scores of all my courses associated with physics are more than 90, so I think I may have a gift for the field. Then comes the chance. I apply for the Science and Technology Innovation Foundation successfully and my professor, who is also my referee, arranged me as the leader of the team. I led my partners to explore the preparation of gadolinium gallium garnet (GGG) polycrystalline material by coprecinitation method and analyzed its optical property. During the procedure, I found the XDR curves of GGG had some buzzes .So I performed the experiment several times and found that after the boiling solution was cooled, some minute deposition(Ga2O3) cause the lack of element Ga, which finally led to the phenomenon. In the experiment, I not only learned how to conduct the instrument, but also got hold of how to analyze and solve the unexpected problems. In addition, the experiment allowed me to acquire some useful analysis software, like Jade6 and Origin, and gave me the opportunity to learn how to organize academic articles, which I supposed could help me in future research. The achievement of the innovation fund encouraged me to make more effort to continue my research work and build my confidence to apply your graduate program.
The atmosphere in （学校） also enhances my love of computer programs. For instance, some of my classmates applied Intel Galileo development boards and they liked to exchange their ideas about how to utilize them to accomplish interesting functions. Thus, it is very nature for me to be influenced in the atmosphere. In the first semester, learned C/C++ language by myself and used it to realize some interesting functions, such as a calculator. Then I learned to use g++ in Linux operation system and felt crazy about the open source code. Then I met a professor in the competition held by Freescale, a global top 500 company, in the last semester. During the match I had a pleasant conversation with him and he asked if I was interested in data mining. In addition, he recommended to me some famous books in the field. Then I read The Recommender Systems and became absorbed by the field. I found many websites utilize the collaborative filtering algorithm to filter irrelevant information, so they can attract more customers and boost their profits greatly. The method really interested me so I participated in his projects in the last semester. Though I entered a new field that I seldom touched before, I enjoyed the field and devoted myself to the study of the recommender system algorithms. Thus, I believe my effort will pay off.
Now I have a dream to become a well-trained engineer so that I can enjoy myself in the field of technology application as well as in the field of theoretical research. Considering my firm professional foundation in semiconductor physics and the interest in computer programming, I would like to choose computer engineering or solid state electronics as my graduate study field.The professors and alumni have made vast accomplishments in the fields of engineering, so I strongly believe that Rutgers will give me a chance to explore the abundant opportunities and possible ways for me to contribute to society in the future.
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