面签的问题?急急急!

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消灭雾霾
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各位大神好!
我是消灭雾霾,今年成功拿到了Truman State University CS的I20表格。
我是高中在澳洲上的11,12年级,托福86分但是自打回来以后英文水平直线下降。我的面签是4月17号的,我想问一下面签有什么注意事项?
第一个,我的学习/回国计划:

I am a high school student, graduated from Norwood Morialta High School in Australia in 2014.After I graduated from my high school. I decide to change the country that I am going to study. By searching online and asking other people, I think it is more convenient to chose America.

FIrst, America have the highest technology level in the world. The knowledge of Computer Science is rapidly changing and in America I can get the information as soon as possible. Secondly, comparing with Australia, the tuition in America is lower. Finally, the climate in Australia in exactly opposite with China, while America have the same weather order with China.

I became interested in Computer Science because I want to know about how a comuter can be used to do things for human beings. The reason that I will go back to China is because China have a strong need of high-tech talents. There is an evidence thatin 2011, there is only about 15% of Chinese labour force are well educated, which is much less than the percent in America. This means in China I will easily have a job that is being respected, with more developing room and easier to achieve my self value.

My plan of study in America is to finish my 5 years study of Computer Science. After I have enough knowledge of Computer Science in the university, I will go back to China and work on it.

实在是不知道怎么写,另外麻烦大神检查一下有没有不通顺的地方。

第二,个人简历本科生也要写吗?我是回国后在酒店打工1个月,在电脑公司当学徒一直到8月走为止。写什么呢?

第三,没有密封的成绩单怎么破?还只有复印件,原件给大学寄过去了???
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