一封老师自己写的+一封白人朋友代写的推荐信
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15Fall申请者，使用了三封推荐信，其中一个老师是暑期项目的校外老板，她的推荐信我一直都不知道写了什么。另外两个老师是本校的，一个亲自为我写的，没有参考我为她拟的草稿。另一个是一个白人朋友照着我的思路写的，措辞太华美了，以至于这个老师把太多太过溢美的话删掉了。XXXXDDDD
参考价值可能有限，但是希望对未来的学弟学妹们申请有所帮助~
这是第一个老师亲笔写的：
[align="left"]Dear Sir/Madam,[/align][align="left"]For the past three years I have known XXXX, he is anextraordinary student in his major study and social intercourse. Ienthusiastically support his graduate application for XXXX program at ZZZZ. I have interacted with XXX in several contexts: as student, asmember of class committee and as friend.[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]XXX has enrolled in my XXXXX classlast semester. The course requires the students to understand XXXXXX and to XXXX. As theteacher, I have the opportunity to observe the students’ participation andinteraction in class and to evaluate their knowledge and interests in this subject.I would rate XXXXX’s overall performance in this course as superior, which isevidenced by his transcript. Moreover, XXXX shows great interests in learningcomputer languages and using them to solve statistical problems. He would noticeevery subtle problem in a program or a function, and raise questions about it.I believe it takes effort and time to find the problem and interests to seekperfection and thorough understanding. Sometimes when I cannot answer thequestions he asked, he would work the solutions out and understand them byhimself or with others’ help. This requires endeavor, cooperation and completecomprehension.[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]As a member of class committee, XXXX is self-disciplined, extrovertedand influential. Every class activity needs to be discussed and organized byclass committee. I remember XXXXXXXXXX. And he XXXXXX. The XXXXX was successful and highly appraised by everybody. Through this process, XXXXXX showed his intellect, enthusiasm for helping and confidence.[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]I have known XXXXXX from the start of his freshman year ashis instructor of study and college life. Besides my course he enrolled, I knowhe have done preeminent work in many others. This cannot be achieved withouthard work, ability to master substantially new knowledge and enjoyment oflearning what he learn. XXXXX has always been handling positive relationships withclassmates and professors. With the ability to communicate effectively andexcellence in his study, he joined several graduate courses, a project and manyextracurricular activities.[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]Based upon XXXXX’s academic performance and my understandingof the position for which he is applying, I believe he would excel academicallyin this program.[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]Please feel free to contact me if you would like to discussit further.[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]Sincerely,[/align][align="left"]Prof. 1[/align]
[align="left"]这是白人朋友帮我为第二个教授拟的草稿：[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]Dear Selection Committee,[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]I am writing this letter to give my highest possible recommendation letter for Mr. XXXX in support of his application to your doctoral program. Every undergraduate student in our department is assigned an instructor to guide their study and help them navigate college life. During the two years I have known XXXXX as his advisor, he has proven himself to be inquisitive, hardworking and charismatic. From the first time I met him, I was impressed by his excellent questions, motivation and obvious intelligence. Unlike most other students I came into contact with who focused solely on cultivating competitive strengths, his questions seemed to be motivated by a desire for self-exploration in order to discover his life passion. He impressed me more and more as time went on, and watching him on his academic journey as an undergraduate has made me confident that he is in the right field of study.[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]I taught XXXXX WWWWW last semester. His score may not be exceptionally high, but his performance in this class was nonetheless distinguished. He stood out from the crowd for his pursuit of perfection and his thoughtful questions . As is the case with many other statistics courses, my course required students to solve PPPPPP using programming. It is in this area that XXXXX’s skills were especially apparent. He attended another graduate course – EEEEEEEE – taught by me this semester. This course aims at students who have grasped RRRRRRRRRRR, making it difficult for undergraduates. Although XXXXXX has only attended several classes, he raised questions concerning XXXXXXXX, which is quite impressive for his level.[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]XXXXXX has actively searched for opportunities to perform research related to his interests. At start of this year, XXXXXX and his two classmates applying for funding to support a research project in which they are interested. They wanted to XXXXXXXXXXXXX . Under XXXXXX’s leadership, they constructed a strong proposal with an excellent framework that exhibited a deep understanding of XXXXXX. They faced intense competition for limited funding and, although their proposal was not ultimately selected, XXXXXXXX’s dedication in assembling this proposal exemplifies the initiative he’s taken as a student and his drive to accomplish his goals. Despite this little setback, XXXXXXX came to my office and asked my advice on his intention to do XXXXXXXXXXXXXX. I think he was quite sure that he would devote himself to researching XXXXXXXX, and he is willing to do that. [/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]In closing, XXXXXXXXX is one of the best students with whom I have had the pleasure of working. I truly believe that XXXXXXXX’s extraordinary academic competence, passionate attitude towards learning, and enthusiastic commitment to his academic endeavors will allow him excel in his future career. With these qualities, I know XXXXXXXXX will be an exceedingly successful doctoral student.[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]Sincerely,[/align][align="left"]Prof. 2[/align]
[align="left"]这是第二个教授帮我修改后的：[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]Dear Sir or Madam:[/align][align="left"]It is my great pleasure to write this letter of recommendation for Mr. XXXX in[/align][align="left"]support of his application to your PhD program.[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]Every undergraduate student in our department is assigned an faculty advisor to guide[/align][align="left"]their study and college life. As XXXX's advisor, I have known him very well. From the rst[/align][align="left"]time I met him, I was impressed by his ambition and obvious intelligence. Unlike most other[/align][align="left"]students I came into contact with who focused solely on cultivating competitive strengths, his[/align][align="left"]concerns seemed to be motivated by a desire for self-exploration in order to discover his life[/align][align="left"]passion. He impressed me more and more as time went on, and watching him on his academic[/align][align="left"]journey as an undergraduate has made me con dent that he is in the right eld of study.[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]I taught XXXXX WWWWWW last semester. His score may not be exceptionally high,[/align][align="left"]but his performance in this class was nonetheless distinguished. He stood out from others[/align][align="left"]for his pursuit of perfection and his thoughtful questions about knowledge uncovered by this[/align][align="left"]course. My course required students to solve many PPPPPPPPP using programming.[/align][align="left"]It is in this area that XXXXXXXX's skills were especially apparent. He also attended my graduate[/align][align="left"]course on XXXXXXX this semester. This course requires knowledge of XXXXXXXX, making it dicult for undergraduates. [/align][align="left"]Although XXXXXX has only attended several classes, he raised questions concerning XXXXXX, which is quite impressive for his level.[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]In summary, Mr. XXXXXX is gifted with strong academic background. I believe that[/align][align="left"]XXXXXXXXXX's extraordinary academic competence, passionate attitude towards learning, and en-[/align][align="left"]thusiastic commitment to his academic endeavors will allow him excel in his future career.[/align][align="left"]Therefore, I highly recommend Mr. XXXXXXX without any reservations.[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]Sincerely yours,[/align][align="left"]Prof. 2[/align]
参考价值可能有限，但是希望对未来的学弟学妹们申请有所帮助~
这是第一个老师亲笔写的：
[align="left"]Dear Sir/Madam,[/align][align="left"]For the past three years I have known XXXX, he is anextraordinary student in his major study and social intercourse. Ienthusiastically support his graduate application for XXXX program at ZZZZ. I have interacted with XXX in several contexts: as student, asmember of class committee and as friend.[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]XXX has enrolled in my XXXXX classlast semester. The course requires the students to understand XXXXXX and to XXXX. As theteacher, I have the opportunity to observe the students’ participation andinteraction in class and to evaluate their knowledge and interests in this subject.I would rate XXXXX’s overall performance in this course as superior, which isevidenced by his transcript. Moreover, XXXX shows great interests in learningcomputer languages and using them to solve statistical problems. He would noticeevery subtle problem in a program or a function, and raise questions about it.I believe it takes effort and time to find the problem and interests to seekperfection and thorough understanding. Sometimes when I cannot answer thequestions he asked, he would work the solutions out and understand them byhimself or with others’ help. This requires endeavor, cooperation and completecomprehension.[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]As a member of class committee, XXXX is self-disciplined, extrovertedand influential. Every class activity needs to be discussed and organized byclass committee. I remember XXXXXXXXXX. And he XXXXXX. The XXXXX was successful and highly appraised by everybody. Through this process, XXXXXX showed his intellect, enthusiasm for helping and confidence.[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]I have known XXXXXX from the start of his freshman year ashis instructor of study and college life. Besides my course he enrolled, I knowhe have done preeminent work in many others. This cannot be achieved withouthard work, ability to master substantially new knowledge and enjoyment oflearning what he learn. XXXXX has always been handling positive relationships withclassmates and professors. With the ability to communicate effectively andexcellence in his study, he joined several graduate courses, a project and manyextracurricular activities.[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]Based upon XXXXX’s academic performance and my understandingof the position for which he is applying, I believe he would excel academicallyin this program.[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]Please feel free to contact me if you would like to discussit further.[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]Sincerely,[/align][align="left"]Prof. 1[/align]
[align="left"]这是白人朋友帮我为第二个教授拟的草稿：[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]Dear Selection Committee,[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]I am writing this letter to give my highest possible recommendation letter for Mr. XXXX in support of his application to your doctoral program. Every undergraduate student in our department is assigned an instructor to guide their study and help them navigate college life. During the two years I have known XXXXX as his advisor, he has proven himself to be inquisitive, hardworking and charismatic. From the first time I met him, I was impressed by his excellent questions, motivation and obvious intelligence. Unlike most other students I came into contact with who focused solely on cultivating competitive strengths, his questions seemed to be motivated by a desire for self-exploration in order to discover his life passion. He impressed me more and more as time went on, and watching him on his academic journey as an undergraduate has made me confident that he is in the right field of study.[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]I taught XXXXX WWWWW last semester. His score may not be exceptionally high, but his performance in this class was nonetheless distinguished. He stood out from the crowd for his pursuit of perfection and his thoughtful questions . As is the case with many other statistics courses, my course required students to solve PPPPPP using programming. It is in this area that XXXXX’s skills were especially apparent. He attended another graduate course – EEEEEEEE – taught by me this semester. This course aims at students who have grasped RRRRRRRRRRR, making it difficult for undergraduates. Although XXXXXX has only attended several classes, he raised questions concerning XXXXXXXX, which is quite impressive for his level.[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]XXXXXX has actively searched for opportunities to perform research related to his interests. At start of this year, XXXXXX and his two classmates applying for funding to support a research project in which they are interested. They wanted to XXXXXXXXXXXXX . Under XXXXXX’s leadership, they constructed a strong proposal with an excellent framework that exhibited a deep understanding of XXXXXX. They faced intense competition for limited funding and, although their proposal was not ultimately selected, XXXXXXXX’s dedication in assembling this proposal exemplifies the initiative he’s taken as a student and his drive to accomplish his goals. Despite this little setback, XXXXXXX came to my office and asked my advice on his intention to do XXXXXXXXXXXXXX. I think he was quite sure that he would devote himself to researching XXXXXXXX, and he is willing to do that. [/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]In closing, XXXXXXXXX is one of the best students with whom I have had the pleasure of working. I truly believe that XXXXXXXX’s extraordinary academic competence, passionate attitude towards learning, and enthusiastic commitment to his academic endeavors will allow him excel in his future career. With these qualities, I know XXXXXXXXX will be an exceedingly successful doctoral student.[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]Sincerely,[/align][align="left"]Prof. 2[/align]
[align="left"]这是第二个教授帮我修改后的：[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]Dear Sir or Madam:[/align][align="left"]It is my great pleasure to write this letter of recommendation for Mr. XXXX in[/align][align="left"]support of his application to your PhD program.[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]Every undergraduate student in our department is assigned an faculty advisor to guide[/align][align="left"]their study and college life. As XXXX's advisor, I have known him very well. From the rst[/align][align="left"]time I met him, I was impressed by his ambition and obvious intelligence. Unlike most other[/align][align="left"]students I came into contact with who focused solely on cultivating competitive strengths, his[/align][align="left"]concerns seemed to be motivated by a desire for self-exploration in order to discover his life[/align][align="left"]passion. He impressed me more and more as time went on, and watching him on his academic[/align][align="left"]journey as an undergraduate has made me con dent that he is in the right eld of study.[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]I taught XXXXX WWWWWW last semester. His score may not be exceptionally high,[/align][align="left"]but his performance in this class was nonetheless distinguished. He stood out from others[/align][align="left"]for his pursuit of perfection and his thoughtful questions about knowledge uncovered by this[/align][align="left"]course. My course required students to solve many PPPPPPPPP using programming.[/align][align="left"]It is in this area that XXXXXXXX's skills were especially apparent. He also attended my graduate[/align][align="left"]course on XXXXXXX this semester. This course requires knowledge of XXXXXXXX, making it dicult for undergraduates. [/align][align="left"]Although XXXXXX has only attended several classes, he raised questions concerning XXXXXX, which is quite impressive for his level.[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]In summary, Mr. XXXXXX is gifted with strong academic background. I believe that[/align][align="left"]XXXXXXXXXX's extraordinary academic competence, passionate attitude towards learning, and en-[/align][align="left"]thusiastic commitment to his academic endeavors will allow him excel in his future career.[/align][align="left"]Therefore, I highly recommend Mr. XXXXXXX without any reservations.[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]Sincerely yours,[/align][align="left"]Prof. 2[/align]
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