我的第一份套磁信,大家给我看看有什么不足之处呗

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Dear ······· :

Sorry to trouble you.I am looking forward to continue my further research in ·····after I read your research focus and experiences,and I think I could make some contributions to your wonderful research projects.

I am currently a undergraduate student in·······China and my major is BME.During undergraduate studies, the courses I have taken focus on medical instruments.My researches focus on:
(1)minimally invasive therapies for varicose veins(a paper has been accepted);
(2)brain waves testing;
(3)Usability testing for medical device user intructions based on eye tracking technology;
(4) Single-chip microcomputer program design based on NEC electronic tools
During researches,I have learned many skills for future BME research,such as designing of minimally invasive medical instruments,mathematical modeling and skills in Statistics to process the datas,programming for the electronic system.

After I read the focus of your wonderful researches,such as: the development of efficacious medical devices, minimally invasive evaluation and medical device designing for solving unmet medical need, I found that my research experience in minimally invasive medical device development matches your research.Besides,my basic knowledge of programming of single chip microcomputer might help design some electronic devices in the future. In addition,my past internship experience in a coorperation focus on designing medical devices could also help in preparing me for your wonderful researches.

Therefore, I crave for the opportunity of being a student of yours in ··········.I am a optimistic and diligent student and I enjoy engaging in researches. So I wonder whether a graduate student is welcomed in your group. I believe I can make satisfactory contributions in your research group.Besides,My CV is also in this mail. If you have any questions regarding me or researches,please feel free to contact me.Thank you so much.

Best Regards

Sincerely,
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大家狠狠地拍哦
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