托福111经验分享 特别是28的写作和30分听力

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面试之后特别方 所以给自己找点事做 把二战托福111(30+30+S:23+W:28)的经验拿出来 仅供参考

阅读
就像很多人会反复强调词汇量词汇量词汇量,单词的积累确实可以胜过一切技巧。因为我是在考过G之后考的托,所以自认词汇量对付阅读还是绰绰有余,当时参加新东方培训的时候确实学了不少技巧,上课的时候也会用到,但是真正考场上一做题,时间一滴答滴答,脑子里哪还记得住那么多窍门,除非这些窍门已经熟能生巧,融会贯通在你的日常做题习惯里了。对于准备时间比较长的筒子,不妨开始增加阅读量吧,挑选一些经典的本专业英文原版教材,会是一个既能锻炼英语阅读又能提升GPA的好方法,另外选择一些其他感兴趣的英文阅读材料,或者针对性地攻克GRE或托福的阅读原文。技巧虽然可以带来高分,但是出国后毕竟是要浸润在英文环境下学习的,阅读能力必不可缺。对于准备时间紧张的筒子,不妨反复刷TOP,对于自己做错题目的原因进行细致分析,在阅读的时候可以不求通篇读懂,但是至少对每一段的中心思想有所把握,这样无论是细节题的定位还是主旨题都能更快作答。

听力
还是那句话,积累胜过一切技巧。当我真的能听懂全文讲的是什么时,那些蒙啊猜的方法真的就没什么用了。同样的,对于准备时间比较长的筒子,开始锻炼自己的耳朵吧。我曾经试过SSS(Sixty Second Science),新概念英语等听力材料,每天在固定的时间(比如吃早饭时,锻炼时等,选择一些放听力不影响自己活动的场合)收听这些材料,不需要全神贯注地听,只是把它当做背景音乐一样播放着,时间久了你信不信有些段落你忽然就可以背出来(这样就对写作也有帮助了不是)。这样日积月累后,你的耳朵会对英语的发音和表达非常熟悉,从而加快考试中的反射弧。对于准备时间比较短的筒子,推荐使用1.2到1.5倍速精听TPO(听力原速很难听懂的同学慎用,可能有不良后果),从1.2开始(基础比较薄弱的同学适量减速,推荐不要使用原速,因为要保持对听力中飞快语速的适应),一句一句话的放,不理解就退回来重听,也可以适量做听写(注意适量,听写还是很费时间的),慢慢地你就会适应这样的语速觉得正常了。在你觉得可以跟上这样语速的听力时,提速!然后重新经历听不懂,听懂一些,慢慢听懂,最终习惯的过程。最着迷的时候我把语速增加到1.6倍,真是叽里呱啦一片,但是真的可以强行听出来里面在说什么,因为经过较高语速的训练后,对于单词发音的条件反射会加强。这个时候回头用原速做一套TPO吧,其中的酸爽真的是只有自己能体会,每一个词都听的无比清晰。基础不太好的同学也建议训练到1.2倍。
口语
一刷22二刷23,既没有高分的练成攻略也没有提分的技巧,真心没什么可说的,还是不要误导大家了。。。

最后的当当当当~~~
写作
作为一个高中英语作文只能拿及格分的选手,我真的特别特别特别自豪。一刷27二刷28,虽然没有什么太大的进步,至少说明了自己每次考试时使用的作文套路是可取的,拿高分并非偶然。
首先,综合写作:
一个字,听力很重要!综合写作全靠听写好咩,听到的越多,可以写的东西越多,这个时候自备一套模板,打遍天下无敌手。怎么练听力,参考前面的加速精听,如果TPO的听力可以听懂并且跟着记下来大部分主旨内容,那么综合写作的听力一定是没问题哒~唯一的区别就是笔记一定要简洁易懂,自带逻辑性,因为这个笔记是要用来写作文的,如果只是堆砌一堆听到的词,没有记下逻辑关系的话,写作的时候会崩崩哒的!!
附上自己的随机习作TPO26一篇(紫色的是模板,桔色是听力观点,绿色是阅读观点):

[align="left"]The lecture oppose the reading's opinion that(此处是阅读文章观点)[/align][align="left"]zebra mussel would severly threat the freshwater fish populations in North Ameria, contending that the arguments in the reading passage are not convincing. [/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]Initially, while the reading stated that(此处是阅读文章第一段观点)[/align][align="left"]according to zebra mussel's history, their spread could not be stopped, the professor held an opposite opinion. He(注意听力中是男是女) claimed that(此处是听力第一个论点) in the past people could not stop mussel from spreading because they lack of knowledge. Nevertheless, now people could pour out the freshwater in the ballast water and refill with ocean water, which would kill mussel. [/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]In addition, the professor casted doubt on the reading's assumption that(此处是阅读文章第二段观点) mussels would dominate any new habitat, arguing that(此处是听力第二个论点) they could only occupy the place at beginning. It would not take a long time before some kinds of birds realize that mussels are new available food. Since a bird could eat a lot of mussels, they would not dominate the habitat. [/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]Moreover, the reading maintained that(此处是阅读文章第三段观点) zebra mussels would give rise to a decline in the overall fish population, which is contradictory to what the professor said. Even if mussels could become dominant, he argued(此处用了插入语,前后都是听力第三个论点), the overall population would increase, as the existence of mussels would benefits other kinds of fish. For example, their waste could provide nutrient to bottom-feed fish, whose population would therefore grow. [/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]从诡异的配色中可以看出,紫色部分基本固定,四种表示听力反对阅读的表达方法可以随意搭配。每段开头的in addition,moreover可以用furthermore等自行替代。阅读部分与听力部分的比例大概是1:2到1:3,取决于听力能记录下多少来。全文219字,基本在给定字数范围内表现了自己对听力观点和细节的理解,考试的时候写过230+字,仍然拿到good,但是毕竟给出225字上限,建议如果超出太多应该对文章进行简化。[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]接下来,是独立写作:[/align]独立写作也只有一个字,详细的事例!虽然GRE对作文的逻辑性要求很高,但是事实证明,托福作文的论点只要有点道理,不管听起来多么蠢,都足以让你过关。那么这个时候,让你脱颖而出的,一个是清晰的文章脉络和论证结构(说白了套模板),另一个很重要的就是有说服力的论据(其实就是详细的事例)。对于三段式的结构大家肯定都熟悉,也肯定有人会问需不需要让步段,如果需要写多少字合适。我的两次作文经验是:让步段可以写,而且我个人推荐写。这其实是为了详细的事例做铺垫,在有限的时间范围内,大部分人只能写出400到550字(其实我自己瞎估计的),除去开头结尾部分,剩下的平均也有400字左右,如果均分三个支持段,每段只能写到130字可能就没有时间写下去了,而聪(sang)明(xin)机(bing)智(kuang)的我会让出50字做一个小小的让步段(解释一下就行了,不需要举例子,如果论证太强了会削弱后面的论证),然后后面两个170字甚至200字的支持段(例子怎么详细怎么说),然后bingo,既满足了三段式的结构,又带来了充实的论证,最重要的是,三个支持或反对的论点真的好难想啊!!!
怎么样的例子叫详细呢?详细体现在对例子范围的细化和精确,比如说下文中我说老师谈论社会事件会误导学生,我不会只说假设有一个老师对社会热点事件大谈其谈blablabla,然后同学们就收到了怎样不好的影响,我会明确谈论的事件是关于男子误射杀女友的(我也不知道我是怎么想到这个例子的。。。),老师提出的主观性的观点是杀人偿命,带来的可能后果是今后出现死人的事件,学生们会倾向给事故责任人更重的处罚(甚至这里还可以脑洞大开,说想象一下如果其中一个学生以后成为了法官,这个老师的言论可能会导致许多事故责任人受到比实际罪行更严厉的处罚,多可怕啊啊啊之类的,就是对可能出现的可怕后果进行进一步展开)。另外,不要担心没有合适的名人名言的例子可以用,只要例子与论点切合且合理,都是可以的。反正我自己就特别喜欢“假设有一个人做了什么什么事,就会带来怎样怎样的后果”这种假设模式,因为这里可以很随便地把论点的情形代入,而且会有怎样可怕的后果全凭我想象,我说有多严重就有多严重(只要不太离谱)。另外可以适量的使用数字和具体名词将例子具体化,比如说明选太多非专业课学生忙不过来,我会说假设一个学生每周除了专业的CS,还要上历史、文学、音乐、地理课(具体的课程名),假设每周除了上课他有30个小时来完成作业(使用具体数字),现在他每周要花XX小时完成他的历史阅读,音乐赏析,文学论文(对学生的负担的具体化),导致他学习主课的时间只剩了10个小时,根本不够blablabla。。。

附上自己随机习作TPO22一篇:其实这里的例子还可以再具体,比如第二段细化为物理课上老师提到了男子误射杀女朋友的案子并作出评价,只有老师讲课时一些学生可能还在脑海中推测着男子与女友纠纷的真正原因,如果是自己会怎么做等等,完全错过了老师讲的力学公式。。。大概就是这样,但是一般自己练习的时候都特别懒。。。
让步段格式:理由+一句话解释,论证段格式:理由+一句话解释+详细事例

[align="left"](第一句引入话题)Nowadays all kinds of questions concerning education and what teachers are supposed to tell students have aroused drastic discussion among the public. Some people reckon that(给出观点)teachers should not reveal their social or political views to students. To a large extent, I approve of this claim, holding that(自己观点) students are supposed to develop their own views after they have observes related social or political events by themselves. [/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]Initially, I have to admit that(让步理由,一句话解释) students should be given the chance to get access to the society and latest political events. By doing this, they would get to know what is happening outside school, which would develop their sense of social responsibility and enable them to have a more in-depth understanding about the world they are living in. [/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]Nevertheless,(理由一) what students need are objective and unbiased desciption, rather than teachers' personal views.(一句话解释) Since students are immature and could not fully understand the complexity of politics, what teachers have said might impose preconception on them, which might interfere their own judgement. (怎么详细怎么写的例子)To be concrete, there is a news saying that a man inaccidentally shot his girlfriend, and a teacher might indignantly claim that this man should be sentenced to death anyway, saying that whoever kills other people should be executed. And this statement would inevitably influence students' mind. Possibility is high that when they hear another news concerning accident in which someone dies, they would incline to give the one who should be responsible for the accident more severe punishment. [/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]Moreover,(理由二)schools are not the appropriate places for students to learn about contemporary social events. (一句话解释)Beside courses concerning politics, in most courses students are supposed to gain knowledge from other fields, and thus teachers talking about their social views would take up time and distract students from their academic study. (怎么详细怎么写的例子)To be specific, imagine a teacher talking about his political view for ten minutes before he start teaching, then one fourth of a 45-minute class would be wasted. Besides, since students are rather young and easy to be distracted, they might still be thinking about the social event the teacher has just talked about when he is already teaching academic knowledge. Even for university students who could control their mind rather efficiently and would not distract, their time is still wasted when the teacher is talking about his political view, which has nothing to do with the course. [/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"] [/align][align="left"]To sum up,(总结陈词的时间到了) teachers ought to keep their views concerning society or politics to themselves, so that they would not intentionally or unconsciously impose their ideas on students.[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]最后一点小Tip[/align][align="left"]1.要坚持啊坚持啊。还记得第一次托福考试,第一片阅读是讲历史的,整个人懵逼懵逼的,写了三十多分钟才完成。当时想着完了连阅读都这样,我还是走吧。但是事实证明我强行用二十多分钟写完了剩下两篇相比之下容易好多的阅读,并且拿到第一次阅读满分。要相信下一道题是会变简单的~~[/align][align="left"]2.经典加试要好好看啊。第二次考听力时遇到加试,以为自己背下来答案所以在东张西望,然后忽然发现忘了答案。。。全瞎蒙的。虽然并没有影响最终成绩,但是毕竟影响心情啊。[/align][align="left"]3.打扮得美美的去考试啊。你的照片会出现在你的成绩单上最后寄到大学去的,我就不说我当时随手没有表情的照片被多嫌弃了。[/align][align="left"]4.听力是万恶之源啊。除了阅读哪科离的了听力啊,提上议事日程啊,优先级要排最高啊。[/align][align="left"]5.有没有多余的人品送我送我。默默地等Ad,已失眠。[/align]
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