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    这是楼主自己写的一篇issue,求老师给改的,改得非常详细。
    Undeniably, as the author suggests, disagreements do have some side effects which lead us to stress and inhibit learning. However, none of us will hes
    Oliveruw
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    外教给的开头样式模板 和提示 大家来看一看吧
    I’ve reviewed it very carefully and want to improve on one specific area: PARAGRAPH DEVELOPMENT – OPENING PARAGRAPH. So, we’re going to fix this and g
    billb
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    「argument」25-25/100/102/164 jazz club [求改]
    题目: 25) The following was written as a part of an application for a small-business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe. A jazz music
    Shallow__pace
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    ISSUE-89
    89. 题目: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system. Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
    Tsien
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    ISSUE-81(parents volunteer)
    求重拍! 81/95.All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to whi
    oliviahuang
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    为了AW而二战GRE,求大家斧正一篇ISSUE!
    好吧,我4月27考了第一次G。但是AW=3……梦校的AW线是4,只好重考 昨晚写了一篇ISSUE,照着李建林那本书的思路来的,也有少许的句子是从提纲上摘抄的。在写作过程中,其实我很明白文章的总体结构应该如何,但是在每个论点的展开过程中,还是感觉力不从心。比如下面这篇: //ISSUE0817
    marine
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    写了好久的GRE Issue,分享一篇求改
    有找native speaker看,只是别人不知道GRE什么模式,也许语法错误比较容易纠正。希望大家帮忙看看逻辑结构什么的,提些意见。还有不到三周就要考了! 这篇文章因为给的statement有两个部分,我的观点为:同意第一个部分,但是觉得第二部分有待讨论。不知道这样写可不可以? Eve
    顺其自然123
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    ISSUE-31
    31. Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities. 人类是否应
    qiamoe
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    issue 11--People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own
    11. People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.Outline: partial agree, 正:1.建立相对自由而不伤害他人的社会,impossible绝对自由,保障well-being
    xzb88
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