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    Issue作文求狠批谢谢大家了！
    The best idea comes from a passionate interest in commonplace things —————————————————————————————————————————————————————— Throughout the history
    Julie10293847
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    issue 21 求批改和意见
    Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to w
    nwt倪文韬
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    ISSUE #19 作文求改
    题目: #19 Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
    jumpsmile
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    Argument1 求狠批
    九月底考试，今天开始一天至少一篇吧。 感觉自己不足在于论证的完备性和文章字数，还有点有时找的太偏。 第一次发帖，美本的同学大约相同时间考可以回复互相监督一下，谢谢大家。 Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive patt
    asddsa
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    快考试了再发个ISSUE求改！
    A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. describe specific circumstances in whic
    oifhyvsps
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    ISSUE作文求改！^^
    题目：Whether in politics or in business, leaders of any group need to understand that learning to compromise is ultimately more important than winning.
    oifhyvsps
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    一下怒上三篇 求体无完肤地骂我
    122 The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or i
    oliver旸啊
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    Argument1 求狠批
    题目 Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern havepreviously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric villag
    wkd22775
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    Argument 14，第一篇，求狠批. (包括攻击框架)
    【Argument 14】The following appeared as part of an article in a business magazine. "A recent study rating 300 male and female Mentian advertising exe
    linyunjia
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    我的第一篇ISSUE文章，求改，ISSUE64。
    64 The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds. Write a response in which you discuss the ex
    yanchao
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    发帖给不给大米？0w0
    The speaker considers that people’s self recognization will surely deteriorate because people are more and more dependent on technology. To this asser
    Akina
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    新GRE Argument 62 医院换洗手液
    ”In a laboratory study of liquid antibacterial hand soaps, a concentrated solution of UltraClean produced a 40 percent greater reduction in the bacter
    蝙蝠
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    求对GRE issue有些见解的大牛指点一二【后天考G 在线等T T】
    实在是感谢各位大神抽出空指点一二，小弟在下面附了一篇作文，我根据XDF老师上课的时候的issue的要点进行比对，要点有1.要正反面都要讨论到，即又要同意一部分，又要反对一部分2.论证充分到位，第2段用了正反论证，第3段用了举例论证，第4段用了逻辑上的三段论，跟老师所用的论证方法相近，并且都已经论证到
    kim0113
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    argument 8 快考了这才第一篇求改！
    题目： The following appeared in a memo from the director of student housing atBuckingham College. "To serve the housing needs of our students, Buckingh
    yjn93
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    argument6 求狠批
    Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. T
    maybemore
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    新人发帖，走过路过的大神有空请帮忙改改argument
    7月5号第一次考G，前天开始练习AW，走过路过的大神有空请帮忙看看，自己不知道该怎么提升，先谢过各位了！ The following is part of a memorandum from the president of Humana University. "Last year the
    husthuangbin
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    issue 13 快快戳进来=w=
    Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student’s field of study. With the severe requir
    printf_ll
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    issue5 求喷
    Claim:Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial supportthey need in order to thrive. Reason:It is primarily in ci
    晨曦1989
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    issue 4 求喷
    Scandals are useful because they focus ourattention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could. Writea response in which you dis
    晨曦1989
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    ISSUE 1求批
    1(20140507)Aspeople rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability ofhumans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. Write
    晨曦1989
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