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第一次发帖， 诚意求教
Do you agree or disagree with following statement? It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humo
finalboss198711754
独立写作-Teaching is harder than it was in the past
题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teaching is harder than it was in the past.
With the explosion of knowledge and information
zz9211772136
独立写作求批改！100626NA【版主按：此文的句法&措辞可作为范文效法】
题目：
people who have learned many different skills are more likely tosucceed than those who focus on learning only one skill. (110827CN=100626NA)
28号
chenzhe14210914
独立作文，求批改，8.17好的鸡精，谢谢啦
题目：people would be happier if they had fewer possessions 正文：Today, moreand more people think if they have more possessions, they would be happier. Iti
fang_wu8948
独立写作---323---different skills---one skill
People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only. When college students come to their workplace,
songcaoxian16584
#感谢mymiracle#在哪里工作好啊 家里还是学校 求改求改
Working condition is an issue that people, especially those who intend to find a job, have always been concerned about. Recently, a question arises: i
ScottShao8384
大家帮忙看看，8月份康老师鸡精独立作文。
The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than to older people.
Nowadays, great
MylittleDonkey167710
独立写作——机经上的 新人求照~
agree or disagree ，the environmental issue is too complex to handled to handle by individual
As the development of the society, environment seems to
simonsong7942
谁的建议更有用：年长者v.s.同龄人
前段时间发现地里有个好东西啊，就是可以互改作文~~~ 然后特勤劳的perlin版主还会很快改完回复~~~一直想写一篇作文发上来大家看看挑挑毛病来着。。。可一直拖到今天才动笔。。。anyway, 不废话了，下面是我的作文，竹子机经11月的第2篇，麻烦各位亲看看，给挑挑错，提提建议神马的~~~
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毛小小猫13246
top 10 writing 2求改
When it comes to the discussion of whether children should be allowed to play computer games, different people have different opinions. Some people th
cfdream10473
9.14 求大神帮忙批改，小弟感谢不尽。。。
题目：Students get benefit from student organization or club activities as much as their academic studies.
With the blooming of education, when it com
fang_wu7814
独立：Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable
题目：Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting advice from friends of your own age.
Everyone needs advice at
RonHe105116
感谢hdchina2010-已修改
Nowadays, sports, including ball games, swimming, running and so on, are becoming an indispensable part of people’s healthy life, leading to popularit
ScottShao13468
独立作文求改
8.24 独立 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exerci
tacit13457
求狠批 Successful people try new things and take risks
题目：Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well
tpo 20 的作文
套了个模板，然后发觉实际上凑不出这么多东西。。。这点真是Orz
matao020228292
机经作文求改求估分
1.求好心人从语法逻辑词句丰富等角度进行评价
2.求估分。
3.不需要留面子。
4.我刚刚开始弄作文，但是824首战了，求意见。
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新人独立写作求改！9.1 考. TPO 23
TPO 23 独立写作
Q: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making m
zwy0211429603
11月9日鸡精作文：students will not use printed books anymore
写到第二个观点的时候发现字数已经差不多了，所以只写了两个。时间差不多一小时，又超标了……分享一下
题目：In 20 years from now on, students will not use printed books anymore
提纲：
Agree
We can read
smellycat22613
鸡精写作—Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does.
写完才发现把题目的范围缩小了，effect happiness直接写成了bring happiness，不知道这样妥不妥当，大神们路过的过给点意见撒，3q啦。
文章大概结构：
开头，表示同意
人们考工作养活自己，只有能养活自己，才有happiness可言
热爱工作是快乐的源泉
结尾，提
smellycat64162
独立写作第三篇求狠批
9.10 独立 Do you agree ordisagree that the rules in societies today are too strict for young people.一直被chinglish困扰着。求各位指正！------------------------------
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