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    第一次发帖, 诚意求教
    Do you agree or disagree with following statement? It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humo
    finalboss1987
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    独立写作-Teaching is harder than it was in the past
    题目:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teaching is harder than it was in the past. With the explosion of knowledge and information
    zz92117
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    独立写作求批改!100626NA【版主按:此文的句法&措辞可作为范文效法】
    题目: people who have learned many different skills are more likely tosucceed than those who focus on learning only one skill. (110827CN=100626NA) 28号
    chenzhe142
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    独立作文,求批改,8.17好的鸡精,谢谢啦
    题目:people would be happier if they had fewer possessions 正文:Today, moreand more people think if they have more possessions, they would be happier. Iti
    fang_wu
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    独立写作---323---different skills---one skill
    People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only. When college students come to their workplace,
    songcaoxian
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    #感谢mymiracle#在哪里工作好啊 家里还是学校 求改求改
    Working condition is an issue that people, especially those who intend to find a job, have always been concerned about. Recently, a question arises: i
    ScottShao
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    大家帮忙看看,8月份康老师鸡精独立作文。
    The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than to older people. Nowadays, great
    MylittleDonkey
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    独立写作——机经上的 新人求照~
    agree or disagree ,the environmental issue is too complex to handled to handle by individual As the development of the society, environment seems to
    simonsong
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    谁的建议更有用:年长者v.s.同龄人
    前段时间发现地里有个好东西啊,就是可以互改作文~~~ 然后特勤劳的perlin版主还会很快改完回复~~~一直想写一篇作文发上来大家看看挑挑毛病来着。。。可一直拖到今天才动笔。。。anyway, 不废话了,下面是我的作文,竹子机经11月的第2篇,麻烦各位亲看看,给挑挑错,提提建议神马的~~~ T
    毛小小猫
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    top 10 writing 2求改
    When it comes to the discussion of whether children should be allowed to play computer games, different people have different opinions. Some people th
    cfdream
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    9.14 求大神帮忙批改,小弟感谢不尽。。。
    题目:Students get benefit from student organization or club activities as much as their academic studies. With the blooming of education, when it com
    fang_wu
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    独立:Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable
    题目:Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting advice from friends of your own age. Everyone needs advice at
    RonHe
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    感谢hdchina2010-已修改
    Nowadays, sports, including ball games, swimming, running and so on, are becoming an indispensable part of people’s healthy life, leading to popularit
    ScottShao
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    独立作文求改
    8.24 独立 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exerci
    tacit
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    求狠批 Successful people try new things and take risks
    题目:Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well tpo 20 的作文 套了个模板,然后发觉实际上凑不出这么多东西。。。这点真是Orz
    matao0202
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    机经作文求改求估分
    1.求好心人从语法逻辑词句丰富等角度进行评价 2.求估分。 3.不需要留面子。 4.我刚刚开始弄作文,但是824首战了,求意见。 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    415221196
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    新人独立写作求改!9.1 考. TPO 23
    TPO 23 独立写作 Q: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making m
    zwy021142
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    11月9日鸡精作文:students will not use printed books anymore
    写到第二个观点的时候发现字数已经差不多了,所以只写了两个。时间差不多一小时,又超标了……分享一下 题目:In 20 years from now on, students will not use printed books anymore 提纲: Agree We can read
    smellycat
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    鸡精写作—Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does.
    写完才发现把题目的范围缩小了,effect happiness直接写成了bring happiness,不知道这样妥不妥当,大神们路过的过给点意见撒,3q啦。 文章大概结构: 开头,表示同意 人们考工作养活自己,只有能养活自己,才有happiness可言 热爱工作是快乐的源泉 结尾,提
    smellycat
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    独立写作第三篇求狠批
    9.10 独立 Do you agree ordisagree that the rules in societies today are too strict for young people.一直被chinglish困扰着。求各位指正!------------------------------
    tacit
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