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    马上deadline了,综合写作一直fair(独立good),跪求大神帮忙(一定尽全力给大神加大米
    小弟一直是照着TPO答案的模板写的,不知道什么问题,跪求大神帮忙,一定尽全力给大神加大米 TPO32综合写作 In the reading,the author presents some theories about the cause of the odd sounds. Howeve
    chuck_long
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    托福写作一直22左右,感觉是有明显问题但是自己感觉不到,求指教
    TPO-40 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the abil
    c0ldstudy
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    求改托福作文!一直22,23分,求大家指明我前进的方向!跪谢!
    1.Which one do you think is the most important factor for a student to success college or university? 1. Tutors in university 2. The encouragement
    北冥堃
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    第一次发帖 7.25考场原题,作文复盘22, 求各位指出问题~~
    Which one is the most important for teacher of high school? (students aged 15 to 18) -Ability to give advice about planning for future. -Ability to
    zylj
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    万年作文20出头,想请大家指点一下原因到底出在哪里~
    With the rapid development of science and technology, electronic equipments have been widely used by not only adults but also our kids. Recently, the
    qico
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    托福写作求狠批 O(∩_∩)O谢谢大家
    16-03-11真题Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading a student does on his/her own is as important as, or even more important than
    satania
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    综合写作求改、求狠批。。越狠越好。。
    综合写作总感觉挤不出牙膏。。很多表达不知道怎么写才地道。。求大家狠批。。。感谢感谢。。 Nowadays, there exists a kind of mosquitos spreading a certain disease. Scientists created a new specie
    JoeLee
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    马上就要考试了求改-TPO48独立写作
    题目:Because modern life is very complex, it is essentialfor young people to have the ability to plan and organize. TPO48 INDEPENDENTWRITINGBecause mode
    oifhyvsps
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    不好意思又来求批改TPO43,希望有人能给我一些指导
    首先很感谢在我上一个求改的帖子里给我提出建议的所有人,让我知道了自己犯的一些低级错误比如标点符号后面没空格和拼写错误,句式和词汇,包括论点和例子之间的逻辑关系等等。 虽然这次也没有太大起色,但是我感觉写的时候比之前有底子一些啦,知道要想清楚 题目-论点-例子 之间的逻辑关系再开始写。 而且我发现
    oifhyvsps
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    tpo31的独立写作求改,,
    先谢谢各位同学了 题目是Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satis
    黎明之前
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    【综合】TPO14 综合作文求改 1战综合Fair跪了
    In the lecture, the lecturer make a point of view about salvage logging, claims that it do harm in long term development of forest, which is contradic
    JEC726
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    tpo23独立作文求改 我这么写算不算小小跑题啊 求指导
    题目: In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
    Jacklx
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    求狠批!哪个对工作成功更重要?适应力or知识
    When it comes to how to succeed in doing a new job, some people think that the ability of adapting to the new environment is more important compared w
    619899442
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    独立写作真题求批改
    题目是It is impossible to always be completely honest with your friends. Honesty might be regarded as one of the most important characters in a rela
    zzg1993526
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    TPO 33综合写作求改 24号T n战绝望了555
    The lecturer regards the three theories proposed in the reading passage about the purpose and meaning of Carved stone balls found in Scotland unconvi
    wb1013
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    独立写作求修改
    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to relax by reading a book or watching a movie than by doing physical exercises?
    toefl100
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    独立写作求修改
    Topic: Some people are more content withthe life in the big city, while others think that they will be more satisfiedto live in the village or small t
    toefl100
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    【独立】政府有没有教育人们健康的生活
    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government is not education people enough about the importance of living a balanced and hea
    夏天不是读书天
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    TPO21独立写作求批改
    限时完成的TPO21的独立写作,希望各位大神给点评分意见。字数:378。语法错误已改,共5处。 题目是 Do you agree or diagree with the following statement? For success in a future job, the ability
    fayllkw
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    独立写作,第一次写,求狠狠的批改
    题目:TPO41 T2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are
    薛猫G
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