tpo23独立作文求改 我这么写算不算小小跑题啊 求指导

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Jacklx
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In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.

As the technology advances, the world is undergoing an unprecedented rapid development. Therefore, it is widely accepted that we should adapt ourselves to the highly changeable world. From my standpoint, it is wiser to finish your work fast and take some risks in making mistakes.
First and foremost, the ability to work swiftly is a must for today’s work force. For some office employees, due to the fast pace of life, they must deal with hundreds of emails and inter-office communications every day. Because of this, they must learn how to work quickly and efficiently or they will never finish his tasks on time, which may result in dismissal. For professions like firemen, police, and doctors, sometimes they need to deal with emergency immediately. In these cases, if they were lacking in this ability, the fire would be out of control, the criminals would go unpunished and the patients would die without timely treatment.
In addition, working promptly is essential to seizing opportunities. As chances are always transient, we need to hurry up to grasp them. Take the shared bicycle for example, there are three companies contending for market share originally. However, when the huge demand of shared bicycle shows up(appears), Mobike was the only one to realize the speed's instrumental role in the competition. Therefore, they worked their ass off and designed a totally(whole) new bicycle, which is equipped with GPS and intelligent lock, preceding the other two companies. This new bicycle was extremely advanced and perfectly met customer’s strong demands so that it did not take a long time to capture the market. As a result, Mobike defeated the others by landslide and soon became the leader of the market.
Last, working quickly can provide an impetus, which lead to a more efficient job. Slow progress in work often dampen people's morality. Inversely, if you want to fulfill a goal quickly, you must exert yourself to complete it. The pressure of time limit will motivate you to reach your potential. For instance, when you are in an exam or an emergency, you have to hurry up and probably risk making some mistakes since you do not have enough time to make sure everything is all right. In this case, you will devote yourself to the task and finish more works than usual situation.
From what has been mentioned above, not only does working quickly and taking some risks help you grab opportunities but also has incentive effect and make your work more efficiently. For these reasons, people should be encouraged to work quickly and risk making mistakes.
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