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    托福写作求助!有偿
    想找老哥写一个托福机经的范文
    原一琦
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    TPO 56 独立写作 求指教~
    Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer
    ydfrdpp
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    第一次发帖 7.25考场原题,作文复盘22, 求各位指出问题~~
    Which one is the most important for teacher of high school? (students aged 15 to 18) -Ability to give advice about planning for future. -Ability to
    zylj
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    TPO 49 独立写作 平衡结构 求改
    【题目】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of
    Lucas_Loo
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    TPO 50 独立写作求批改~
    题目: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what th
    qqwsad5
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    求改托福作文!一直22,23分,求大家指明我前进的方向!跪谢!
    1.Which one do you think is the most important factor for a student to success college or university? 1. Tutors in university 2. The encouragement
    北冥堃
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    托福写作一直22左右,感觉是有明显问题但是自己感觉不到,求指教
    TPO-40 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the abil
    c0ldstudy
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    万年作文20出头,想请大家指点一下原因到底出在哪里~
    With the rapid development of science and technology, electronic equipments have been widely used by not only adults but also our kids. Recently, the
    qico
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    TPO3-综合写作求改
    TPO3-综合写作- Rembrandt 画作 (题目kmf上有,抱歉发不了链接) 在kmf上评测一直是4分,但自己感觉听力的点都写全了,看5分的作文写的点也都是一样。不知道怎么改了。求大神指点。我听力的笔记如下: 分论点1: fur collar , not origin, paint ov
    hellopipu333
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    做事越快越好但容易出错还是慢慢做保证每一步做对呢?
    新人处女贴请多指教 好几个月没写作文了今天干脆就不限时了。。果不其然文思枯竭写了一个多小时挤牙膏才挤出这么多字,不过开头段和第一个论点写的还挺顺的(可能是因为写之前就构思到这吧),后三段式真·挤牙膏orz 不管写的多烂还是希望有看官能给出中肯的建议~ 原题:Do you agree o
    VincentRow
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    求各路大神狠狠挑刺!题目:父母从孩子学到的比孩子从父母学到的更多
    Adults are always willing to educate their offspring with their own worldview, but they do not realize that children’s perspectives are intrinsically
    蝶越沧海
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    tpo53独立 修网or修路 求改谢谢给加米!
    字数541 提问:写作时间总是不够怎么办?这样一篇要写40多分钟枯了.. 以前写作文总是被老师说扣题扣不住或者偏题 想让大家主要看看有没有这个问题 谢谢大家! In the contemporary society, both the basic city construction pr
    Thea_E_
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    第一次写独立作文,不知道方向求指点
    TPO1 independent writing 之前看过一些写作的结构啊,段落安排什么的,然后用1个小时连写带改完成了第一次的独立,各位大神能帮我看看大方向有没有问题吗? These days we often hear about that many students, especially
    GuoJSeven
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    托福写作求狠批 O(∩_∩)O谢谢大家
    16-03-11真题Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading a student does on his/her own is as important as, or even more important than
    satania
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    独立写作,第一次写,求狠狠的批改
    题目:TPO41 T2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are
    薛猫G
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    TPO 49 独立写作求批改~
    题目: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of
    hanss
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    TPO21独立写作求批改
    限时完成的TPO21的独立写作,希望各位大神给点评分意见。字数:378。语法错误已改,共5处。 题目是 Do you agree or diagree with the following statement? For success in a future job, the ability
    fayllkw
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    独立写作真题求批改
    题目是It is impossible to always be completely honest with your friends. Honesty might be regarded as one of the most important characters in a rela
    zzg1993526
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    小站论坛上改了一次,想问下大家意见
    改回来的作文只有21分,改回来的都是英文的,我怀疑是不是外教改的,总之评论里给了一些建议,但是我不是很认同,问问大家怎么感觉 Do you agree or disagree: it is better to use your own knowledge and experience to sol
    鱼淼淼
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    综合写作TPO13 求改
    The lecture apparently refutes what is argued in the reading material. According to the passage, the private collectors will damage the study of fossi
    upupup100
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