老师给的奇葩推荐信

1个月前我问老师要推荐信，老师还挺热情的说可以。后来我写好一版给老师，他说不行，英文太差。

我战战兢兢又写一版，措辞严谨，篇幅也比以前长了。

过了一个星期，老师给我回了一封这个：

To whom it may concern,

This is to recommend $$$, who is one of my talented student. $$$ took my courses in 2012 and I was also his advisor in a student project.

He has the following strengths that I found during these two years:

1. He is responsible and helpful: He is willing to help in organizing the teams in my courses. He always double checks that the jobs such as preparing experiments are well done.
2. He is hardworking as he is really interested in this area.
3. He is open and thirsty to learn.

Overall, I would strongly recommend $$$ to apply your program. I hope he can succeed.
Best regards,

各位大大，这样的推荐信行吗，会不会太简单？