为什么我给小米email就不怎么回呢？请大家帮我看看是不是哪里说错了~~

这是我邮件的模板：

Dear XXX,
I am an undergraduate student majoring in Biology Engineering in XXX University in mainland China.
I want to pursue a MS/PHD degree in XXX Program in XXX University in 2012 fall.

Can you please tell me some information about the application:

1)How soon can I get my application result after I submit my application materials?
2)What's the average score of some examinations required for this department?Like the average applicants' GPA,GRE,TOEFL these years.
3)Approximately,how many international students will XXX program accept in 2012 fall?
4)Can you please help me evaluate my chances for the applying competition?Do you accept any undergraduate student who is not major in XXXX?
My GPA is 87/100,and my GRE score (paper-based test) is 1460+3.0,June 2011.
My first try on TOEFL is 94.

Thanks very much for your help.Your early reply is highly appreciated.

If I should contact another people who is more familiar with the admission process,could you please tell me how to contact him/her?
I don't want to miss any information to be accepted by XXX University.

Thanks very much.

Sincerely,
XXX

自己感觉还好哇~是不是问的方式有问题啊？
大家都怎么给小米邮件的？
我发了6、7所，还一所没回呢。。{:4_112:}