CMU INI Essay 问题回答求批

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CMU INI Essay中有这样一个问题
What one or two things set you apart from other applicants? Have you placed well in CTFs, programming competitions, or hackathons? Have you done significant community service? Have you published peer-reviewed research? Have you received significant awards? Have you participated on a sports team or performance group?

我有两个版本:
I had a lot of practical experience about networks. I designed and configured IP address and routing protocols on Nokia lab routers. I practiced networking using various methods like Mininet, POX controller, OpenFlow Switch Hardware and OpenDaylight controller. I also had experience in praciticing virtualization services in real world by using Amazon Web Services (AWS). Now, I am preparing to take Network Routing Specialist Certification exam.I believe the abundant experience I have can make me a conpetitive in the admission.
In addition to the experience I had, I also had chance to communicate and learn from key providers in the network industry such as Nokia and Juniper networks. I had a conversation with Senior Consulting Engineer and Regional Product Line Manager during my Nokia industry visit and learn about SD-WAN and why it has become an important technology solution Juniper Guest Presentation session of my course. The close contact with famous enterprise in the field give a comprehensive understanding about information networking.

[align="left"]Unlike some college students who only studyin classroom, I am more of a person who tries to learn from differentperspectives at different places. At our university’s labs, I finished multiplecourse projects, and I enjoyed the process more than theoretical studies; atstudent organizations, I was at management positions and practiced myinterpersonal skills which I believe are equally important comparing totechnical depths for engineering students; at internship positions, I had thechance to see and learn how companies solve real-life problems, and practicewhat I have learned at school. My spirit of exploring outside classroom makes adifference, and I believe it’s a game changer for an engineering student.[/align][align="left"]
[/align][align="left"]有人说我第一个看上去有点low,推荐我放第二个[/align][align="left"]但我觉得第二个就很空?感觉没讲啥[/align][align="left"](其实两个好像都不能set me apart,但至少也要写一个吧[/align][align="left"]现在就很纠结,不知道应该放哪个内容上去[/align][align="left"]求大家狠批!拜托[/align]
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