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A or DA the major purpose of television is to educate but not to entertain. 090222CN 071005NA
DA驳论提纲：
1. 电视要满足大众的各种需求（科幻 犯罪 动漫 人与动漫 新闻 教育）（否则，收视率低->电台收入低；观众也没获得满足）
2. 电视主要以娱乐为目的，提供放松（教育节目带来更多压力，压力已经很多了不应该再增加更多压力）
3. 教育节目虽然给人们带来了更多信息与知识，但教育主要来自于学校，电视上真正能学到的东西也不多；不如让电视以娱乐的角色出现
批改侧重点：逻辑、词句。
正文：
Television is everywhere innowadays society. Thanks to the rapid development of electronics andcommunication technology, various programs of high quality are delivered to peoplethough televisions. When it comes to the debate that whether the major purposeof television is to educate or entertain, people hold different points of view.As far as I am concerned, I deem that the television is created forentertainment. Programs of television should be catered to massive kinds ofrequirements of the public.
Various people have their own special flavors ofchannels on television. Some people may like to watch movies of sciencefiction, others may prefer comics channels. News, series of television, music videos,education programs, and lots of other forms of television programs are providedto fulfill the needs of the public. No one could deny that if most of channelsare oriented for education, television stations will break down sooner or later.Because only few people who prefer watching education programs are fulfilled,and majority of people are disappointed to face with only these programs whichare boring for them. If television stations are going bankrupt, how can thesechannels survive and not to mention creating more education programs for thepublic.
Entertainment which brings the masses withhappiness and relaxation is the main purpose of television. Image that when oneis home after a day's hard work or study, opens the television and finds thatthere are full of programs of education and only few channels of entertainment,what will he or she do? Actually, most individuals will get more pressure inthis situation. More entertainment programs on television are demanded and cannot be obviated.
Admittedly, education programs on television canbring people more information and knowledge; it is not appropriate to assumethat television is created for education. Whereas schools, colleges oruniversities, and some other institutions of education are regular places forindividuals to absorb knowledge. Besides, some information acquired fromtelevisions is wrong and might even lead the public to behave improperly. Inlight of this, it might just as well to provide people with more channels ofentertainment.
In summary, the main purpose of television is toentertain the masses while not to educate them. Both the public and thetelevision station will benefit from television which is oriented forentertainment.
DA驳论提纲：
1. 电视要满足大众的各种需求（科幻 犯罪 动漫 人与动漫 新闻 教育）（否则，收视率低->电台收入低；观众也没获得满足）
2. 电视主要以娱乐为目的，提供放松（教育节目带来更多压力，压力已经很多了不应该再增加更多压力）
3. 教育节目虽然给人们带来了更多信息与知识，但教育主要来自于学校，电视上真正能学到的东西也不多；不如让电视以娱乐的角色出现
批改侧重点：逻辑、词句。
正文：
Television is everywhere innowadays society. Thanks to the rapid development of electronics andcommunication technology, various programs of high quality are delivered to peoplethough televisions. When it comes to the debate that whether the major purposeof television is to educate or entertain, people hold different points of view.As far as I am concerned, I deem that the television is created forentertainment. Programs of television should be catered to massive kinds ofrequirements of the public.
Various people have their own special flavors ofchannels on television. Some people may like to watch movies of sciencefiction, others may prefer comics channels. News, series of television, music videos,education programs, and lots of other forms of television programs are providedto fulfill the needs of the public. No one could deny that if most of channelsare oriented for education, television stations will break down sooner or later.Because only few people who prefer watching education programs are fulfilled,and majority of people are disappointed to face with only these programs whichare boring for them. If television stations are going bankrupt, how can thesechannels survive and not to mention creating more education programs for thepublic.
Entertainment which brings the masses withhappiness and relaxation is the main purpose of television. Image that when oneis home after a day's hard work or study, opens the television and finds thatthere are full of programs of education and only few channels of entertainment,what will he or she do? Actually, most individuals will get more pressure inthis situation. More entertainment programs on television are demanded and cannot be obviated.
Admittedly, education programs on television canbring people more information and knowledge; it is not appropriate to assumethat television is created for education. Whereas schools, colleges oruniversities, and some other institutions of education are regular places forindividuals to absorb knowledge. Besides, some information acquired fromtelevisions is wrong and might even lead the public to behave improperly. Inlight of this, it might just as well to provide people with more channels ofentertainment.
In summary, the main purpose of television is toentertain the masses while not to educate them. Both the public and thetelevision station will benefit from television which is oriented forentertainment.
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