5.18北京check 现在非常心虚自己的study plan里career的部分有移民倾向 大家可以帮...

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我5.18在北京被check 心态很好
但是最近翻阅自己的study plan 里面career的部分是这么写的:
After graduation, I plan to start my career as a software development engineer in QuantTrading firms such as Janestreet and Akuna (It is highly possible that I will get the return offer from the shanghai office) or high-tech companies such as Apple and Google. In the long run, I want to have a startup of my own, focusing on building social platforms and entertainment for the elderly group. I think the aging problem is a challenge that the world is about to face. Especially in China, because of the one-child policy, many parents can not get enough accompany from their children when they get old. I want to develop entertainment and social platforms to benefit the elderly group
感觉自己没有强调return to china
虽然我陈述了 我大概率会拿shanghai office的return offer 也说创业想解决的老龄化问题在中国比较严重
现在特别心虚....感觉自己很手欠 Apple和Google也有中国office 但是我没有强调....
我觉得我写了一个honest statement但是给自己挖了一个坑啊 留了很多空白部分
大家怎么看呢...QAQ
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