【yourprowriter1】跟地里推荐的writer水平没法比，还格外自信

看到网上五星好评就拿来试试水，结果意外的很拉垮……随便贴一段他写的话：“What can be done to interrupt the vicious cycle of the widening gap, which is producing a slew of challenges, including educational discrepancy, which leads to fewer opportunities for those affected? ”

他给的反馈是“Greetings! I have spent several hours reviewing your essay. It was in pretty raw form. There were some major problems with connectivity, flow, sentence construction, and persuasion. I have already formatted it for your convenience. It's a lot better now, and it's ready to go. Thank you so much for putting your trust in me! Cheers!”
我内心：哪里ready to go了 ？？还得找人再改我晕……

补充内容 (2021-11-27 00:54 +8:00):
给他打六分都算仁慈了