tpo7,综合写作求改，两次都是fair，好囧啊~~~~~
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两次考试，独立写作都是good,不过综合写作都是fair，也不知道是哪里的问题，我感觉点都听到，也写了的呀。发给TPO7，求指教
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The lecture points out that wood companies in the United States will receive ecological standard certification, which contradicts the reading passage.
First, customers in the United States treat advertisements differently. It is the fact that customers in the United States strongly doubt the reliability of advertisement which is produced by the company to advertise its own products. However, the customers are favorable to the certifications with highly international reliability. Therefore, customers in the United States will certainly value or pay attention to the ecocertification label.
Second, the price is not the only motivation of customers in the United States to purchase goods. The customers will be strongly motivated by price only when the price gap between two products is actually large, if the gap is moderate, the customers will take other factors, such as the ecocertification, into consideration.
Third, it is necessary for American companies to keep up with the developments in the rest of the world. The lecture claims that receiving ecocertification is not for customers but for competing with other companies. The domesticate companies in the United States will lose many parts of their customers if they don't receive ecocertification compared with aboard companies who receive the certification, because ecocertification will certainly attract more customers.
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The lecture points out that wood companies in the United States will receive ecological standard certification, which contradicts the reading passage.
First, customers in the United States treat advertisements differently. It is the fact that customers in the United States strongly doubt the reliability of advertisement which is produced by the company to advertise its own products. However, the customers are favorable to the certifications with highly international reliability. Therefore, customers in the United States will certainly value or pay attention to the ecocertification label.
Second, the price is not the only motivation of customers in the United States to purchase goods. The customers will be strongly motivated by price only when the price gap between two products is actually large, if the gap is moderate, the customers will take other factors, such as the ecocertification, into consideration.
Third, it is necessary for American companies to keep up with the developments in the rest of the world. The lecture claims that receiving ecocertification is not for customers but for competing with other companies. The domesticate companies in the United States will lose many parts of their customers if they don't receive ecocertification compared with aboard companies who receive the certification, because ecocertification will certainly attract more customers.
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