求狠批 Successful people try new things and take risks
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题目：Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well
tpo 20 的作文
套了个模板，然后发觉实际上凑不出这么多东西。。。这点真是Orz
如果都没法细改的话说一下大的问题。{:4_85:}
当时想的是这样：
A：支持尝试和冒险的人：
1.没有创新坐吃山空
2.成功人都靠新发现/想法脱颖而出
3.畏惧冒险会导致失败（似乎重复了）
B:不支持：已知的东西是基础
个人想法：有A无B有机会，有B无A没机会。所以A重要
求批改
Before rendering my opinion, it's necessary to take a glance of both sides. Those who hold the view that trial for new thing and risks contribute more to success than doing conventional things should hold at least one, if not all, of the following opinion.
One of the reason why people support this idea is that following what they have known is just repeating the past, unlikely to lead to a success. Even though some people inherit much wealth from past generation and seem to be successful, these achievements should be ascribed to the ancestors. If the present generation just do what know how to do well without any new creation, the advent of the decline in the accumulation will be unavoidable.
In addition, the company of new inventions or discoveries with success should be another reason for the statement. In modern society, most of the businessmen or scientists obtain their great success by their new technology or idea. In order to defeat other competitors and achieve success, knowing how to do well is not enough to break through the present situation. They need some new ideas and have some trials to realize them, indicating the importance of creation and imagination.
Thirdly, much of the failure is arisen from the fear for risks. Creations has an assumption that this field has never been exploited before and it is possible that all the efforts would be in vain in the end. However, with no one taking any risk or trying something new, this will be no improvement any more, let alone success.
For those who disagree with this statement, the familiar things are the basic of success. These things can help somehow evaluate the risks and provide some improvement for the new invention.
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the statement that the trial for new things and risks play an important role of success. As are mentioned above, the familiar things really make some preparation for the success, but the ways to success is built up by the trials and risks. It’s possible for a person with great creation but not familiar enough with this field to succeed while those who never step into a new world is unlikely to have the chance. To sum up. For those successful persons it is more important to try new things and take some risk than only focus on what they have known.
ps：其实写完才发觉反过来好像例子更好举一点。
tpo 20 的作文
套了个模板，然后发觉实际上凑不出这么多东西。。。这点真是Orz
如果都没法细改的话说一下大的问题。{:4_85:}
当时想的是这样：
A：支持尝试和冒险的人：
1.没有创新坐吃山空
2.成功人都靠新发现/想法脱颖而出
3.畏惧冒险会导致失败（似乎重复了）
B:不支持：已知的东西是基础
个人想法：有A无B有机会，有B无A没机会。所以A重要
求批改
Before rendering my opinion, it's necessary to take a glance of both sides. Those who hold the view that trial for new thing and risks contribute more to success than doing conventional things should hold at least one, if not all, of the following opinion.
One of the reason why people support this idea is that following what they have known is just repeating the past, unlikely to lead to a success. Even though some people inherit much wealth from past generation and seem to be successful, these achievements should be ascribed to the ancestors. If the present generation just do what know how to do well without any new creation, the advent of the decline in the accumulation will be unavoidable.
In addition, the company of new inventions or discoveries with success should be another reason for the statement. In modern society, most of the businessmen or scientists obtain their great success by their new technology or idea. In order to defeat other competitors and achieve success, knowing how to do well is not enough to break through the present situation. They need some new ideas and have some trials to realize them, indicating the importance of creation and imagination.
Thirdly, much of the failure is arisen from the fear for risks. Creations has an assumption that this field has never been exploited before and it is possible that all the efforts would be in vain in the end. However, with no one taking any risk or trying something new, this will be no improvement any more, let alone success.
For those who disagree with this statement, the familiar things are the basic of success. These things can help somehow evaluate the risks and provide some improvement for the new invention.
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the statement that the trial for new things and risks play an important role of success. As are mentioned above, the familiar things really make some preparation for the success, but the ways to success is built up by the trials and risks. It’s possible for a person with great creation but not familiar enough with this field to succeed while those who never step into a new world is unlikely to have the chance. To sum up. For those successful persons it is more important to try new things and take some risk than only focus on what they have known.
ps：其实写完才发觉反过来好像例子更好举一点。
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